New Moon Poem

This poem was sent in by one of our readers named Raquel. She is 17 and from Mexico. I really enoyed it and thought I would share. Hope you like it too.
As for the picture I typed in New Moon in google images found this and thought it was pretty!
One Day At A Time – raqeelrmz!
I looked at you
And I could feel I saw your soul
I could feel you in my bones
Just by looking at you
Then you were gone
Thinking that was best for me
Thinking I could just live
Without looking at your eyes
Without looking at your eyes
I feel that I’m breaking in parts
There’s a hole inside my heart
I can’t take you of my mind
I’m just trying to survive
One day at a time
A little light
Helped me survive
Gave me the strength
Not to fall again
But you are on my mind
In every thought
I can hear your voice
And it don’t hurt that much
The moment of the jump is here
I can hear you telling me not to
But I can’t live another day
Without looking at your eyes
I just can’t survive
Cause’
Without looking at your eyes
I feel that I’m breaking in parts
There’s a hole inside my heart
and I can’t take you of my mind
I’m just trying to survive
One day at a time
Preatty!!
=D
Wow thats amazing!! It would make an excellent song especially on the New Moon soundtrack ^.^
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love the poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OME OME OME OME OME
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IT IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that could actually be a good song if you changed some of the words to rhyme a little
WOW I LOVE IT!!!!!
omg i love it it made me cried it’s awsome
woah. this poem is great.
wow ! it’s amazing i love it !
OMG Beautiful amazing i L*O*V*E it sooooooooooooooo much
awwwww
Dat was sooo sweeet! absolutely lovd it
OME this is such a beautiful poem. It is perfect for New Moon. I love it!
in the five verse its doesnt not dont..
but besides awesome song too bad i cant here the tune..
I DIDNT LIKE IT I HATE POEMS THE RYME. SORRY BUT I DIDNT LIKE IT.
Omg, perfect for New Moon, love it
WOW! that poem is amazing I felt like crying just reading it!!
when i was reading this i was listening to titanic theme song and it sounded really cool together.
haha. thats funny.
really good poem.
Love it! So cute!
awesome!! lovin a few lines!! very touching!!
beautiful
i really thought this poem was great it was really really good
you mispelled off in the 2 sentences that say i can’t take you of my mind could you please fix it for me thank you very much.
Ms.Edward cullen says I love it.
Team Edward says I Love the poem.
ah thats really good. im a big fan of twilight. but im team edward
i went to see breaking dawn 2 times in the cinama really good
team edward all the way. love breaking dawn