New Moon Poem

by on September 26, 2009
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This poem was sent in by one of our readers named Raquel. She is 17 and from Mexico. I really enoyed it and thought I would share. Hope you like it too.

As for the picture I typed in New Moon in google images found this and thought it was pretty!

One Day At A Time – raqeelrmz!

I looked at you
And I could feel I saw your soul
I could feel you in my bones
Just by looking at you

Then you were gone
Thinking that was best for me
Thinking I could just live
Without looking at your eyes

Without looking at your eyes
I feel that I’m breaking in parts
There’s a hole inside my heart
I can’t take you of my mind
I’m just trying to survive
One day at a time

A little light
Helped me survive
Gave me the strength
Not to fall again

But you are on my mind
In every thought
I can hear your voice
And it don’t hurt that much

The moment of the jump is here
I can hear you telling me not to
But I can’t live another day
Without looking at your eyes
I just can’t survive

Cause’
Without looking at your eyes
I feel that I’m breaking in parts
There’s a hole inside my heart
and I can’t take you of my mind
I’m just trying to survive
One day at a time

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27 Responses
  1. Ashleigh says:

    Wow thats amazing!! It would make an excellent song especially on the New Moon soundtrack ^.^

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  3. team jacob says:

    love the poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    ;)

  4. OME OME OME OME OME
    I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    IT IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    that could actually be a good song if you changed some of the words to rhyme a little

  5. Twilighter says:

    omg i love it it made me cried it’s awsome

  6. ysatis (: says:

    woah. this poem is great.

  7. Viki Cullen says:

    wow ! it’s amazing i love it !

  8. nikki ann says:

    OMG Beautiful amazing i L*O*V*E it sooooooooooooooo much :) :-)

  9. TaylorLautnerISMINE!! says:

    awwwww :P Dat was sooo sweeet! absolutely lovd it ;) :D

  10. Marit says:

    OME this is such a beautiful poem. It is perfect for New Moon. I love it!

  11. shaharEB says:

    in the five verse its doesnt not dont..

    but besides awesome song too bad i cant here the tune..

  12. Golden_Eyed_Girl says:

    I DIDNT LIKE IT I HATE POEMS THE RYME. SORRY BUT I DIDNT LIKE IT.

  13. Siret says:

    Omg, perfect for New Moon, love it

  14. Alice says:

    WOW! that poem is amazing I felt like crying just reading it!!

  15. Jasperluvr says:

    when i was reading this i was listening to titanic theme song and it sounded really cool together.

  16. NiKKi says:

    Love it! So cute!

  17. jess says:

    awesome!! lovin a few lines!! very touching!!

  18. Jackie says:

    beautiful

  19. Brianna says:

    i really thought this poem was great it was really really good

  20. Ashley says:

    you mispelled off in the 2 sentences that say i can’t take you of my mind could you please fix it for me thank you very much.

  21. Ashley says:

    Ms.Edward cullen says I love it.

  22. Ashley says:

    Team Edward says I Love the poem.

  23. shauna says:

    ah thats really good. im a big fan of twilight. but im team edward :) i went to see breaking dawn 2 times in the cinama really good

  24. shauna says:

    team edward all the way. love breaking dawn

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