Poem
Twilight and Twilight Merchandise
This poem was sent in by one of our readers Kayla. I hope you enjoy it!
Mirror holding withered, aged face
Hair white and out of place
Love, my love walking towards me in the light
Forever and always alive, I will forever and always age
Todays birthday,
my birthday
How many has he celebrated?
Nightmares of things to come, my future life
Splattered across my mind
Pictures, memories
a photobook of sorts
Candles, roses cover wall to wall
Birthday cake and crystal glass plates
Silver wrapped package laid in my clumsy hands
Could she see what was to come, what is going on,
what will be gone?
Red crimson, cake splattered
Six golden eyes lay upon a
feast of flowing blood
He is leaving, gone
White house with wall of windows forever empty
Piano sits still, music no longer lingers
Bubbly life prancing in the halls, the dance has now ended
A kiss on the forehead,
a promise worth keeping
“Never existed” but will always remember
Life, as I have known it, no longer worth living
The moon sets and
my Sun soon rises
Uhm, wow. that was amazing. i wish i could write like that.
Love it!
W-O-W!!! I really liked it! i wish i had that high level of creativity to make such beautiful and strong poem!
OME! That is such a reat poem yet really sad. I can’t wait for the movie!
Thanks for posting my poem Leandra. I was having a really bad day but this cheered me up! And thank you to everyone who enjoys it.
WOW THAT WAS AMAZING. I POSTED IT ON TWITTER. HOPE YOU DONT MIND. WELL I POSTED THE LINK TO THIS PAGE ON TWITTER….
OMB thts a great poem! I loved it!
omb?
oh my … ?
Oh my Bella.
that was awsome. never stop writing
That is an amazing poem.
I FEEL LIKE EVER SENSE I SENT IN MY POEM PEOPLE HAVE BEEN WRITTING POEMS AND SENDING THEM IN. THEY THINK JUST BECAUSE THEY CAN MAKE A COUPLE OF WORDS RYME DOSENT MEAN THEY CAN WRITE POETRY AND IT MAKES ME MAD SO JUST STOP! OK JUST STOP BECAUSE YOUR NOT THAT GOOD
golden_Eyed_Girl
This is Leandra and this is the second time you have dissed another readers poem, not one person knocked yours. You have been rude to two people now and you will not be rude to a third. You don’t like the poem that’s fine say you don’t like it do not insult the writer.
I liked the poem and thought it was good or I would not have posted it. So therefore I believe they are a good writer.
Do not insult another person poems ok. This is a clean fun site and I won’t have people being rude.
Thank-you
Leandra
LOOK IT WAS NOTHING PERSONAL I JUST NEEDE SOMETHING TO DO. I WAS MAD SO I BASICLY TOOK MY FEELINGS UT ON THIS. LIKE I SAID NOTHING PERSONAL BUT SORRY.
that doesnt cover it..take it out on somthing else not another persons creation!
CREATION. YOU GUYS ARE ACTING LIKE ALL POEMS ENEN MINE ARE LIKE SOMETHING SO BIG. GUYS THEY ARE NOTHING MORE THAN WORDS THAT FIT TOGETHER EVEN MINE. THEY ARE JUST SOMETHING WE DO IN OUR FREE TIME. AND LIKE I SAID BEFORE IT WAS NOTHING PERSONAL AT ALL SO STOP CHEWING ME OUT. OK SORRY LEANDRA.
your forgiven we all have bad days
Thanks for apologizing everyone be nice now
that’s a great poem. i have some poems that i want to send you but i don;t know how, can you tell me.
there is a contact button at the bottom right hand side of the page in the jacob box
THATS AN AMAZING POEM
ND golden_Eyed_Girl
THIZ IZ AN AMAZING POEM AND MAYBE IT IS
BETTER THAN YURS OR ITS NOT
HOWEVER IT IS A GREAT POEM
THEY HAVV A RITE AS YEW HAVV YUR RITE
TO SEND IN POEMS
Kayla Oldridge GREAT POEM
Thank You.
oh that was soooooooo beautiful these poems are really nice keep up the good job ppl
!!!!!!!
That was so beautiful Kayla.
Now that you mention
Quote: “Could she see what was to come, what is going on,
what will be gone?
Why didn’t Alice see that coming…But then we would have had Eclipse and Breaking Dawn to look forward to.
Wow again to all of they poem writers..Very talented..
Love it.
love the poem…………………………….
i mostly like the end of it…………..
luv it its amazin i wis i cul actually write like tat i waz like wow
oh my word! this is amazing!
Thank you again everybody…it means a lot!
dis poem is very good
heii 2 DAII IS MA BIRTHDAY IM GOIN TO PARTY VERY HARD AND NAUGHTY
hey kayla! this is awesome!!!
u r soo talented -write more!!!
This poem is really touching.
this one was amazing Ö !!!
that was awesome i could never write like that and im in the 10th grade
this is really touching &
i even qot goose bumps down my back.
i conqratulate you on this … this
is wonderful, & you should proceed with your writing
<3
Very nice poem ^_^. I just want to ask everyone who is going to make a poem could you please make one about Bella and Edward instead on New Moon or Jacob? But this is still very nice
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this poem is amazing and i agree with Team Alice that it wud b nice to read an adward and bella poem but still gr8 poem one of the best ive read Kayla, you should keep writing more as ur really gud
i love these poems so much i wish i wuld be able to rite like that! i dnt have the patients! but those r so deep! they r amazing and i want to be able to do that! love them good job keep sending poems in!