New Moon Poem

by on October 10, 2009
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This was sent in by one of our readers Kalani. Here is what she had to say about the poem, “It is how Bella feels right after Edward leaves her in New Moon. ” Hope you all Enjoy!!!

Twilight
Twilight and Breaking Dawn

Without You

Its dark out here.
Like someone just shut off the lights and my eyes haven’t adjusted yet
I’m blind
I’m lost in the dark
Lost without you
Can’t see whats in front of me
Can’t see what the future holds for me
There’s no hope to ever be brought back into the light again
Not while your gone.
So what’s the point
Why should I move
Why should I get up from this forest floor
I’d rather let the rain fall and soak deep into my bones than leave this spot
I tried to follow you
Stupid I know
With your speed you were a miles away as soon as your lips left my forehead
But I just couldn’t stop
I’d rather be lost in this forest forever than go back to a life without you.
I can’t.
Your words flow through the air above me
Like a harsh winter wind whispering through the leaves
As if I’d never existed
A promise broken as soon as it left your frozen lips
Why am I here then
Why am I on this forest floor
Why does it feel like I’m resting on the bottom of the ocean as water pours into my lungs
Its because you do exist
Because we existed
But now you’ve disappeared
Leaving only empty promises.
I hear their voices
See their flashlights
But I don’t want to be found
Pick me up, take me home, surround me with people
But I’d still feel as if I was in this forest
Searching
For something that can never be found
Something that’s never existed before
Something that can never be duplicated
You.
So let me be
Let me lay here forever
Maybe over time ill become part of forest
Just some object that the trees will grow around
Let me lay
As the waves of pain wash over me
I take my last breath filled with your sweet scent that still lingers on my skin
And this lonely lamb will sink into the darkness
Forever lost without her lion.

Comments

54 Responses
  1. Mickee says:

    This poem is so nice.. the writer did a really good job. Thank you for sharing

  2. leeshy says:

    omg that poem is so beautiful… it almost made me cry….

  3. Bonnie says:

    I love the poem very much. Great job.

  4. SHELIA says:

    LIKE THE POEM VERY MUCH.

  5. emily says:

    wow, its now my favourite poem:)
    its so good

  6. Twilighter. :) says:

    that is soo good.
    the only poem i’ve actually felt for and cried to (on this website)
    amazing, and damn how i wouldn’t want to be bella at that given time.
    can’t wait to see it in new moon though!! 😀
    bring on nov 20th!!
    xx.

  7. omg………………..
    it is beautiful……………
    i almost cried…….
    it is amazing how do people write like this
    i could never do than
    EVER

  8. shaharEB says:

    awwww so cute

    the last two lines are so sad..

  9. Jackie says:

    my heart broke for Bella all over again.

  10. Viki Cullen says:

    this poem is so beautiful, great job !

  11. Sofia says:

    oh my god! this poem is so good. is better than many that i’ve alredy read on this and other sites! Really I mean it. it’s really really really good and beautiful and I can picture Bella saying it. ILOVE IT!!

  12. omg this was like the best poem ever!!!!!! i loved it soo much!

  13. Heather says:

    Too long for my liking, but oh my, it was freakin’ amazing. I love it. A+

  14. AlwaysOnTeamCullen247 says:

    you have an amazing gift with words! so glad you shared it!

  15. HollyWood says:

    wow, you are an amazing writer
    i love the poem, good job!

  16. LEXI says:

    GREAT JOB!!! I LOVE IT!!

  17. TwilightGirl says:

    That is an amazing poem. It has brought a tear to my eye. Great job. It really describes how Bella is feeling at that point when Edward leaves her.
    Cant wait for new moon ill probs cry again, jus like i did in the book.
    TEAM EDWARD always. :))

  18. kalani says:

    hey guys thanks so much for ur comments glad u liked my poem!

  19. I LOVED THIS POEM, IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL,IT WAS SO DEEP, LIKE I WAS IN THE SAME SITUATION.BRILIANT!!!!!!

  20. team robert(: says:

    This was soo good!
    i died all over again

  21. Tatjana says:

    omg i am so doin gthis for my grade 5 verse and prose

  22. Bella4eva says:

    This would make a good song! 🙂

  23. TEAM JACOB!!!! says:

    I L-O-V-E THIS SONG!!!!!

  24. chenne lopez says:

    ./’hay i have nothing to say about the twilight…
    super…fantstic
    very phenomenon..am so addicted to twilight..
    no.1 fun

    ilove robbet pattenson

  25. chenne lopez says:

    ./’hay i have nothing to say about the twilight…
    super…fantstic
    very phenomenon..am so addicted to twilight..
    no.1 fun

    ilove robbert pattenson

  26. TEAM JACOB!!!! says:
  27. lily says:

    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!kalani is my bestest friend in the world!im so proud of u girly!the poem is amazing!miss u!love you!

  28. THIZ POEM IZ SO FAR MI FAVORITE!!!
    GO Kalani!!!!
    L0L SUPER AWESUM POEM!!!
    LIKE FER REAL!
    L0L

  29. Ebony says:

    “There’s no hope to ever be brought back into the light again”

    i loved this line….good job

  30. rob4evinlife says:

    i love this poem its amazing cant wait for new moon to come out

  31. YAMY says:

    UMMM… I GOTTA SAY…IT IS MORE OF THE SAME…BUT IT IS GOOD…

  32. Star Cullen says:

    Thank you for sharing…

  33. Emma C says:

    This is a birlliant poem!!It really captures the moment well done to the poet!! It’s fantastic!!! XxX

  34. robismine says:

    that was so cute that it makes me cry!!!!

  35. Brrrrrrittnie =] says:

    OMGGGGG!!! beautiful! i loves it! go kalani!

  36. EVEY loves ROB/EDWARD says:

    i loved the poem. its very sad . and i cant wait to watch the movie already.

  37. AussieGirl says:

    This is such a beautiful poem!
    The last two lies are my favourite!
    You are very talented Kalani! 🙂
    Good job, and thanks for sharing it with everyone! 😀
    Cant wait til the 19th!! 🙂

  38. AussieGirl says:

    I mean the last two lines. 🙂

  39. mykaela says:

    awww. i love this. its really heart breaking though. *sigh*.

  40. Marit says:

    Wow this is a really good poem.
    I wish i can write like this (*sigh*)

  41. harmony305 says:

    Absolutely beautiful… that’s just how she felt in the book. Love it!

  42. Patty says:

    beautiful. I love it ?

  43. Patty says:

    oopsies, that was supposed 2 be a heart XD <3 there we go! lol

  44. K.D H says:

    it’s really a nice poem.
    and i can feel Bella’s emotion from it.
    paiful, miserable, lost.
    all i can read.
    and i have experienced such miserable process.
    really sad poem.
    Bella got hurt, for Edward’s leaving.
    she’s dying, and she hopes to die, for Edward’s leaving…
    i like english poems, and tried to write some, but not very beautiful.
    and thank the writer!

  45. Lion&Lamb says:

    Wow, great job! I feel what she’s feeling! I can’t wait for the movie… I got my tickets FRIDAY!!!!!! yay!

  46. Brier Langan says:

    hey i really like your pome do you think if i write a pome you could put it on twilightguide and i like to know wht team r u TEAM EDWARD or TEAM JACOB

  47. ZzhaMMie..Kc4e says:

    ..Wow..Is WoNdErFul..I LiKe ThIs So mUcH..It´S So..It´s In My hEaRT nOw..Ohh AnD ThAnKs.. Because I need ThIs PiC..ReAlLy..ThAnKs..

  48. FLORENCIA says:

    ME ENCANTO EL POEMA!

  49. FLORENCIA says:

    ES TAN LINDO ROBERT PATTINSON (EDWARD) !
    LO AMO, ES EL MEJOR DE TODO EL MUNDO! ?

  50. same thinking my love

    i loved it

  51. shauna says:

    ah thats so good. i love edward hes hot.

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