Twilight Inspired Poem

by on October 29, 2009
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This poem was sent in by our reader Zoila. Her is what she had to say about the poem, “I wrote this poem from Bella’s perspective & how she feels about Edward.”

I really like it. Hope you enjoy!!!

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Bella’s Love

Fire vs. Ice, Fur vs. Stone.
But there is no competition. I know where my heart belongs.
Skin that’s too hot vs. Skin that’s too cold.
To try to break our unbreakable bond, he must be bold.

I don’t care if he can make me warm while the cold win blows.
Because in my sleep I speak your name & this I know, you know.

It is tough though, losing a friend. But I’m gaining so much more.
Gaining a love that I never knew existed until I moved here to Forks.

I saw you walk into the cafeteria, the absolute meaning of beauty.
& I’m happy you couldn’t read my thoughts, that you couldn’t see through me.

He’s sweet, he’s nice, some people say he’s the sensible path. But I’m happy with the one I’ve taken.
The one who makes me quiver & smile. The one whose heart I won’t be breaking.

A perfect match. The lion & his lamb. Opposites surely do attract.
Because you’re the only one I’ll ever want & I’ll never take that back…

Comments

29 Responses
  1. Team Alice says:

    First comment!

  2. Team Alice says:

    It’s beautiful :) .

  3. Heather says:

    I love the last two lines. Its a good poem altogether tho.

  4. Team Alice says:

    I just tried to learn guitar online for free without a lefty guitar….. it took too long so I gave up, lol, and I think I’ll stick to piano.

  5. Twilight Fanatic says:

    Wow! its amazing!!

    team alice? you are on here alot hey?

    • Team Alice says:

      Lol, yeah, about all my free time. Why? Lol. But now I have to go and carve pumpkins! Bye! Be on as soon as I’m done!

      • Twilight Fanatic says:

        Nothing its just that you have like more than 6 comments on everything put on here.

        Wow you must have really less homework if you can go on this site alot.
        i usually do homework uptill 6 or 7 and then i go eat dinner then i come on here and THEN i maybe reread a part of one of the twilight series.

        excited watching twilight again on tv tonite even tho i have watched it online like 5 or 6 times…just cant get enought of it.

        theats why we are all twi fans hey??

        anyway enjoy carving pumpkins and HAPPY HALLOWEEN to all fans!!!

  6. aliceann says:

    I think i enjoyed reading this poem the most of all. it was very nice :)

  7. rachel says:

    that was really nicee (: i love it and twilight and EDAWRDD

  8. KaylaCullen says:

    wow. its so beautiful. i love it. im gunna try and write a poem.

  9. Team Switzerland says:

    I really like this poem!! Its really good!!!:)

  10. AussieGirl :D says:

    Aww this is so beautiful! I love it.

  11. Carlesme says:

    I’ve got a poem too:

    Wouldn’t it be a stroke of luck
    If Victoria was hit by a truck.

    *bows* Thank you.

  12. AussieGirl :D says:

    HAHA! Aw man, Carlesme: I love your poem! Its the best!! Lol :)

  13. nicole says:

    Heres part of a poem I wrote. theres a lot more of it

    How could I forget the one I loved so deeply
    Although he left his mark on me
    Leaving a hole in my chest
    I just couldn’t let go

    At first I tried to move on
    And after months I found my replacement sun
    I loved him even though my heart was taken
    He knew I was broken
    But he loved me anyway
    He tried to fill my aching gap
    But I still couldn’t let go of him

  14. Tifan(: says:

    nice poem(: and i love the one above, i like the last two lines.

  15. twihardHoneey says:

    i LOVE THAT POEM! i love the last two lines too! Great poem Zoilaa!!

  16. Moomtahi says:

    Wow!!That poem was really nice.Way to go Zoilaa!!!!!

  17. gidha says:

    Beautiful,I love, and I love about Bella, Edward n Jacob of course!!

  18. belinda says:

    “Because you’re the only one I’ll ever want & I’ll never take that back…”

    WOW. Bella couldn´t have said that better!

  19. ALEXIS BLACK says:

    I don’t care if he can make me warm while the cold win blows.
    Because in my sleep I speak your name & this I know, you know.

    I love this part it is so beautiful!!!

  20. Robyn says:

    Wow this should be published, it’s great!!!!
    Because in my sleep I speak your name and this I know you know
    that’s my favorite.
    This is really Bella! Zoila if you’re reading, fantastic, thanx for sharing!

  21. Mrs. Hale says:

    This was pretty good. :] I like it.

    Who do I contact to submit a poem?

  22. Thanks guyz! Zoila here! I enjoyed writing it & I love the Twilight Saga!

  23. Sarah says:

    that was really good!!

  24. layla cullen says:

    all my comments are months late!!!

    but loved it!!!

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