Comments on: Twilight Inspired Poem

By: layla cullen

layla cullen — Sun, 25 Apr 2010 19:18:36 +0000

all my comments are months late!!!

but loved it!!!

By: Sarah

Sarah — Sat, 31 Oct 2009 04:09:53 +0000

that was really good!!

By: robsten rockz

robsten rockz — Sat, 31 Oct 2009 03:50:40 +0000

Thanks guyz! Zoila here! I enjoyed writing it & I love the Twilight Saga!

By: Mrs. Hale

Mrs. Hale — Sat, 31 Oct 2009 03:32:39 +0000

This was pretty good. :] I like it.

Who do I contact to submit a poem?

By: Robyn

Robyn — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 22:36:21 +0000

Wow this should be published, it’s great!!!!
Because in my sleep I speak your name and this I know you know
that’s my favorite.
This is really Bella! Zoila if you’re reading, fantastic, thanx for sharing!

By: ALEXIS BLACK

ALEXIS BLACK — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 22:21:42 +0000

I don’t care if he can make me warm while the cold win blows.
Because in my sleep I speak your name & this I know, you know.

I love this part it is so beautiful!!!

By: belinda

belinda — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 10:28:28 +0000

“Because you’re the only one I’ll ever want & I’ll never take that back…”

WOW. Bella couldn´t have said that better!

By: gidha

gidha — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 09:18:08 +0000

Beautiful,I love, and I love about Bella, Edward n Jacob of course!!

By: Moomtahi

Moomtahi — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 06:01:58 +0000

Wow!!That poem was really nice.Way to go Zoilaa!!!!!

By: twihardHoneey

twihardHoneey — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 05:32:33 +0000

i LOVE THAT POEM! i love the last two lines too! Great poem Zoilaa!!

By: Tifan(:

Tifan(: — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 05:31:18 +0000

nice poem(: and i love the one above, i like the last two lines.

By: nicole

nicole — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 03:36:49 +0000

Heres part of a poem I wrote. theres a lot more of it

How could I forget the one I loved so deeply
Although he left his mark on me
Leaving a hole in my chest
I just couldn’t let go

At first I tried to move on
And after months I found my replacement sun
I loved him even though my heart was taken
He knew I was broken
But he loved me anyway
He tried to fill my aching gap
But I still couldn’t let go of him

By: Twilight Fanatic

Twilight Fanatic — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 02:13:04 +0000

LUCKY!!! WOW!! So u have all this free time…no wonder you get so much time to come on here…lol

have you been to a school before??

By: Team Alice

Team Alice — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 02:06:19 +0000

Lol, I’m homeschooled.

By: Twilight Fanatic

Twilight Fanatic — Fri, 30 Oct 2009 01:43:18 +0000

thats cute