Twilight Inspired Poems

by on October 31, 2009
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Twilight
Eclipse Movie and Breaking Dawn

Here are some poems sent to us by our reader Savannah from Germany.

Enjoy the poems!!

First One:

he loved her
he left her
she cryed
he thought she died
she came
he took the blame
he’s trying to make her sane
they left
they voted
and now shes devoted
and so he says
“i’m here, i’m here with you.”
and thats what i quoted.


Second Poem:

new moon i am poem

i am heart broken
i wonder if he really meant it
i hear his voice
i see him gone forever
i want him back
i am heart broken
i pretend he will be in my room when i wake
i feel like that wont happen
i touch the empty spot where his picture once was
i worry i will be alone
i cry because he is gone
i am heart broken
i understand what he did was for my own good
i say i am okay
i dream the scene when he left
i try to think of other people
i hope i will forget
i am heart broken

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21 Responses
  1. mRs.TAYCOB says:

    i really really like the first one its great but theyre both so good!!! cant wait till NEW MOON AHHH!!!!!

  2. Team Alice & Jasper says:

    love the first one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    TEAM CULLEN FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  3. Heather says:

    I love the first one, very short, sweet and to the point. The second one is good as well.

  4. Sarah says:

    only 20 days til new moon cant wait

  5. Rachel says:

    I LOVE those poems! They are soooo sweet. Great job, ya’ll.

  6. savannah germany says:

    well i am not from germany thats my last name and thankyou guys for loving my poems i am 13 and i love to write its my passion!

  7. mRs.TAYCOB says:

    i can tell u luv to write theyre very very great

  8. Mary Reed says:

    I love both of them. Whoever wrote these poems did a good job. Those poems were so deep.

    • savannah germany says:

      thankyou it comes to me naturally i have 6 books full of poems i have wrote!! its crazy! i am 13 and i started those notebooks when i was 12 so 1 year 6 books.

  9. mRs.TAYCOB says:

    OMG r u serious god ur so good ate writing u should publish it lol

  10. pickel says:

    WOW there are NO WORDS great enough to describe all ur BEAUTIFUL poems! KEEP ON WRITING!!!!!!!!!
    ~pickel=D

  11. Team Alice says:

    Oh, I’m glad you put that first one up there, I read a comment with that and thought you should send it in.

  12. ALEXIS BLACK :) says:

    i try to think of other people
    i hope i will forget
    i am heart broken

    THIS IS MY FAVORITE PART OF THE SECOND POEM!!

  13. Hali says:

    I LOVE TWILIGHT! IT IS AWSOME! LOVED THE POEM! YOUR WELCOME!

  14. Kira says:

    I Didnt Write This But When I Read It I Thought Of Jacobs Feelings Toward Bella

    I love you more every day,
    My name I long for you to say.
    Do you know just how I feel?
    Do you know this love is real?
    Sometimes I wonder what you think.
    When you hear my name, do your cheeks turn pink?
    Do you dream about me every night?
    Wish to hug me and hold me tight?
    Do you think we’re meant to be?
    Together forever, you and me?
    These are the questions that run through my mind,
    Your way into my heart, you did find.
    It drives me crazy as to what I should do,
    Should I risk a friendship and confess to you?
    Or should I keep my feelings inside,
    Keep them locked up, let them hide?
    I just don’t know what to do anymore,
    My heart it aches, my heart it’s sore.
    I love you more than you could know,
    And I don’t want to ever let you go.
    So even if I’m just a friend,
    I’ll always love you until the end.

    It Allways Makes Me Think Of the Moment In New Moon When Bella Tells Jacob How She Feels:(

    Go Team Edward!!!!!!!!!

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